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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 31, 2009 0:17:03 GMT -5
Okay guys, my creativity has been a bit down lately, as you can probably tell by my lack of posts. So I came up with a challenge that will help both you, and me. I am going to post some very short stories. One at a time. And I want you guys to guess whether it is fact, or fiction. For example, a discriptive first person story about a girl who cuts herself periodically. You get to decide if this is based on me, or if it is fictional. Any questions? Let's start!
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 31, 2009 0:17:56 GMT -5
What Love Is
I can’t help but think this is where I want to be forever. I love him, more than I ever thought possible. It scares me more than I care to admit, but I need him, and I think he needs me too. When his hands graze my arms, goose bumps form. When his lips touch my neck, I shiver with pleasure. I am content in his arms, and over flowing with joy when I am with him. I don’t know how I got this way. A year ago I didn’t even know it was possible for me to be loved, or to find someone whom I loved with all my heart. It’s almost ridiculous to think this is me now, this happy, giddy, stressed out woman who spends a great deal of her time thinking about her significant other. It could be a dream, for all I know. But yet, I know it is not. It cannot be a dream. If I were to awaken, I would cry, and die on the inside. Feel coldness in my heart that could only be heated with his touch, and his gaze.
Sometimes he stares at me. We stare at each other; not touching, just looking. It’s remarkable to see his eyes flicker across my face in fast succession. Almost as if he is seeing the beauty in me, that I cannot, or will not, see in myself. The blemishes are invisible, the scars are nonexistent. He only sees me- the true me, the beautiful me. His brown eyes settle on my blue ones, I feel the need to blush and look down. A single finger touches my chin to raise it back up. I can’t help but feel my heart pound at this simple gesture. As his gaze meets mine once again.
Simple gestures. Those are his specialty. He doesn’t seem to know this, nor understand how a single kiss is more meaningful to me than those in quick succession. He doesn’t get why I get driven crazy when he kisses my cheek. Sometimes when I lay on his chest in the passenger seat of my car he will rhythmically stroke the side of my face slowly. Up and down, up and down. The softness of it can sometimes put me to sleep, but before I fall under he places a single kiss on my forehead that keeps me awake. I look up at his eyes, and I just know. I know I love him, and I know he loves me back. That feeling alone is enough to make me cling to his t-shirt, never wanting to leave his side, and it is almost as if he can read my mind, because he wraps his arms around me and pulls me closer. That is what love is.
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Post by Axle on Aug 31, 2009 8:04:10 GMT -5
I'll say this first one is true.  |
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Aug 31, 2009 8:31:48 GMT -5
Hmm... Sounds true to me, as well, but I'm bad at this kind of thing.
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Post by Genesis on Aug 31, 2009 13:17:58 GMT -5
Fiction, but like sapphire, I'm not very good at this unless I know the person.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 31, 2009 17:58:37 GMT -5
It's true actually Even rereading this, it seems too good to be true, but I'm glad it is. I love him. |
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 31, 2009 17:59:18 GMT -5
Oh, and if ya'll would like to post something, go right ahead!
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Post by Genesis on Aug 31, 2009 19:42:59 GMT -5
Lucky you. |
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 31, 2009 20:48:26 GMT -5
Dude, you have no idea lol
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Aug 31, 2009 22:11:43 GMT -5
I'm glad you're happy, Beauty. I was hoping it was true. |
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Sept 1, 2009 16:48:49 GMT -5
I hope to write another one of these tonight and post it for ya'll, so keep looking.
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Post by Endovia on Sept 1, 2009 18:03:18 GMT -5
Awesome idea, Beauty. I'll be checking back soon most definitely.  |
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Sept 1, 2009 23:00:10 GMT -5
I'll keep checking back. |
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Sept 2, 2009 18:44:24 GMT -5
awesome lol though i ended up having comp 1 hw  |
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Sept 3, 2009 12:13:48 GMT -5
Not a problem. Post when you can. |
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