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Post by ~Beauty~ on Feb 16, 2008 21:28:24 GMT -5
Kayla kind of conflicts with Jessica in the 'she gets what she wants' field. Though in one scene Kayla admitts that she is afraid of being beat up, which sounds minor now, but comes into major play in the sequal. She is so intense, she sometimes intiminates people.
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Feb 19, 2008 22:00:03 GMT -5
Okay. That's a good start on her faults.
I agree, fable, about people stealing writing. There's always that fear that someone else will try to write it... Even worse is the fear that they'll do it better than I ever could.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Feb 20, 2008 22:48:07 GMT -5
Last Character in the Trio: (She's most like me)
Name: Adriane Joyce Coswell
Orgin: Joyce because she remains happy and true to herself, even when we start to doubt her.
Physical description: Tall, curvy (normal weight) Bleach Blonde hair, kind of...plain? She cares more about her books and actions than how she looks. Though when she pretties herself up, she's gorgeous.
Flaws and Personality: She's really shy, but conquers this later in the story. She goes through the most changes in the book. Shy to confident. A little nerdy, quotes books and corrects grammar. Upset about her older sister moving away and getting married.
Anything else you want to know?
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Feb 21, 2008 20:16:54 GMT -5
Sounds great. Now I just want to read the story.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Feb 22, 2008 16:48:42 GMT -5
I'm planning on posting a section of it after I finish editing and rewriting it. It does have a twist at the end... I won't spoil it.
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Feb 22, 2008 18:19:31 GMT -5
Cool. I can't wait to read it.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on May 23, 2008 18:55:38 GMT -5
sorry, I've been gone forever. Ummm... Kayla's faults. Way too reserved, scared of exposing herself. Keeps to herself, even Jessica and Adriane don't know some facts about her. Perfect on the outside, a bit scared on the inside.
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Post by sapphiresmoke on May 23, 2008 23:51:17 GMT -5
Excellent. As long as that's clear in the story, she's a great character. Don't worry about being gone for so long... Real life comes first.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on May 24, 2008 9:02:18 GMT -5
That's why i want to rewrite it before I post some of it here, it's not that clear. It's short, but nevertheless it's going to take forever to rewrite! I'll probably get start up again soon...I've been having isues lately, to say the least.
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Post by sapphiresmoke on May 24, 2008 17:26:34 GMT -5
Yeah, it'll probably be hard to rewrite... Worth it in the end, though.
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