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Post by Endovia on Aug 3, 2008 11:52:48 GMT -5
And your not going to tell us about these new scenes?
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 3, 2008 19:53:08 GMT -5
Darn! I did it again! My lips are tight though... Just wait!
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Post by Endovia on Aug 3, 2008 19:55:33 GMT -5
Haha. We'll see how tight they are...
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 4, 2008 11:06:12 GMT -5
I haven't quite worked it out yet. It's almost like seing bits of a movie in your head, I see it happening...but I don't know how to get to that point. I have to string them all together.
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Post by Endovia on Aug 4, 2008 11:28:25 GMT -5
Yeah, I know what you mean.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 4, 2008 15:38:41 GMT -5
There are two angles I'm thinking about going to. And I need a bit of help. Option 1: Charlotte and Johnathon are together and he gets abusive. Somebody goes to the police and there is a trial and stuff. OR Option 2: Charlotte tries to get him away but he stalks her. <--Not so sure about how this would work out yet.
I'm thinking about option 2, or maybe a little bit of both. I know a bit about over protective and stalkerish boyfriends. My sister had one.
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Post by Endovia on Aug 4, 2008 15:42:55 GMT -5
Could you do both? You could have them together he starts to hurt her and she tries to get him away. Later Charlotte catches him stalking her. Or some other variation.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 4, 2008 15:47:54 GMT -5
I'm thinking about my sister's situation a long time ago...thank god he's done and gone. Anyways, what basically happened was this: She loved him even though he kept tabbs on her at all times. Like gave her cell phones my parents didn't know about and she would have to call him whenever she went somewhere without him. He always kept her within eye sight. Very possesive, he had anger issues to I think. In a lot of ways he's like Johnathon, I never thought of that before until now. He also kept her with him by telling her how much he loved her, and gave her jewelry and gifts. Basically manipulating a young girl. You know how 15yro can be, lovesick and romantic all the time. My sister was 15 when he met her and he was 18 maybe? She was around 17 betime her fiance came along and swooped her away from him. I'm seeing and idea here... hmmm. I wasn't planning on creating my sister's story, but I definitely see some real life ideas and inspiration working here...
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Post by Endovia on Aug 4, 2008 15:50:23 GMT -5
Wow. Talk about possessive.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 4, 2008 15:53:10 GMT -5
crazy stuff, and I like Charlotte will be. He also talked her into bed. Soooo illegal, but my parents didn't find out until it was too late. She got a std, but it was a bacterial treatable one. So no harm done or anything, but still. Gross. I'm giving you to much info, aren't I? lol, my sister is my key inspiration in this story. Maybe if similiar girls read it, they might know the signs or something. Maybe say no.
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Post by Endovia on Aug 4, 2008 15:57:20 GMT -5
I'm sure there will still be some surprises. Those kick ass scenes? It's good that you find inspiration from real life. I agree, it'd save other girls from going through something similar.
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Aug 11, 2008 11:43:47 GMT -5
Wow, that's a really sad story... I'm glad your sister came out of it okay.
I think this story will help other girls. It's great that you can get so much inspiration from RL, too.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 11, 2008 13:23:05 GMT -5
I'm a lucky person, or unlucky. However you want to look at it lol.
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Post by Endovia on Aug 11, 2008 14:40:01 GMT -5
Eerm...I'm going to go with lucky. But since I don't know everything about you, you could be unlucky, too. *shrugs* I'm hoping your a lucky person. Good luck is good.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Aug 11, 2008 15:38:45 GMT -5
I dance in the middle. lol
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