Next Characters

[~Beauty~]

My characters in book seems to travel in threes
Anyway, here is a brief overview of the 3 main people, and the antagonist (sp?).

Charlotte Elizabeth Manson: Narrator. Strong, holds her own. Kind of bad a$$. She's a bit random, and over thinks everything. She's a singer, and it tall. 5.8", not athletic, creative, writes own songs for band. Not skinny, shapely curves. Dark (almost black) brown hair. Hazel eyes-tint of green, keeps to herself unless with friends. 17-2nd oldest of friends. Her Birthday is May 19th <<-----Why is that important, I'm not sure yet ;D

Derek "Doony" Conlee: Guitarist for Charlotte. Doony is her best friend. Known each other since he moved here. Funny, light hearted. Adores Charlotte, though she never sees this. Triees to take care of her. 5.10", natural red hair (dyes black) green eyes. Semi-muscular. 17-yongest. Birthday is May 22nd.

Leslie Ann Brooks: Charlotte's best friend. 5.5". Bleach blonde hair, long curls. Square framed black glasses. Brown eyes. Serious, intense. No-nonsence. Down to earth. Strongest, atheltic girl. 18-oldest. Birthday is November 4th
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Antagonist!! *insert evil laugh*
Johnathon Rice: 23 year old. Takes advantage of Charlotte. 6ft tall, is a jerk. He goes from mysterious and sweet, to something bad. Tan, brown hair, blue eyes. Muscular. "perfect" Birthday is Feb 11.

Thoughts please?

[Endovia]

Very intriguing set of characters. Will you be posting the story? I'd love to see them in action. I'd also like one of my characters to meet Charlotte. Perhaps it would put her back in place. Lol. ;D

[~Beauty~]

I can post the first 3 pages hehe. I've hand written 13, I'm in the process of typing.

[Endovia]

Awesome, can't wait to read. =D

[sapphiresmoke]

They sound pretty good. The story is sounding good, too.

[~Beauty~]

HAHA! I found the importance of the birthdays, I thought and thought then BAM! It just came to me. I can't tell you though, it might ruin the story

[Endovia]

Awesome! I can't wait to know why the birthdays are so important.

[~Beauty~]

Technically just Charlotte's, and I might spoil it later on. But it's kind of relevent to the end.

[Endovia]

Cool. I'm eager to know why it's important. Perhaps you can just spill it out now? Lol.

[sapphiresmoke]

*sigh* What is it with giving hints and then refusing to say what they MEAN? Augh! Although I suppose I can't complain... I do that all the time. Lol.

[Endovia]

That's why I try not to give any hints at all. I just leave the readers with assumptions until I post more. Hehe. ;D

[~Beauty~]

I'll just spill it out then! I can't keep book secrets well!
Basically this relationship with Johnathon last's until she turns eighteen. So like 3 months.
If you haven't figured it out yet, Johnathon is a possesive person, who does hit her a few times.
But most importantly...he has sex with her. He is 23, and she is 17. Even though it was consented, she was still a minor. Her dad will come through for her and press charges.
It's more of the ages than the birthdays I guess.

[Endovia]

Whoa, I didn't expect that. I thought her birthday would be important for some celebration or something special happens on that day.

[sapphiresmoke]

Eep. Whoa.

[~Beauty~]

lol! Now I ruined the whole story!!!! No, not really. *smirks* You don't know everything yet. Like some cool kick ass scenes I just recently thought of.