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Jack
Aug 26, 2007 17:53:27 GMT -5
Post by hhorsie on Aug 26, 2007 17:53:27 GMT -5
you can read my story under mysterious mountian, and get an opion about Jack...
Here are some facts about him:
He is not married
He lives on his ranch, in a house by himself, his sister and family live on the ranch, but about a 1/2 mile away.
He is conscious that he is lonely, yet doesn't ever take any action, and hides thoes feelings.
His dad was his best freind until he died. They had a good relationship. (he did have a mother)
He is hard on the outside, soft on the inside... If you know what i mean.
His passion is horses, but his ranch make most of its money on thier cattle.
He was born w/ a special ability to feel horses feelings through touch.
He has blond hair and soft blue eyes.
He is the character in the novel I am writng, and my short story (in my mind) happens before the book.
Knowing this what do you think about him? What do you think should happen next in my story?
Let me know! If you need anymore info just ask, I know everything about him!
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songbird
New Member
And in the end, it's not the years in your life that count. It's the life in your years. - Abe L.
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Jack
Aug 26, 2007 20:45:39 GMT -5
Post by songbird on Aug 26, 2007 20:45:39 GMT -5
I think he's a great character. I like how you described at an emotional level too. Thanks for sharing!!
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Jack
Aug 27, 2007 18:25:14 GMT -5
Post by hhorsie on Aug 27, 2007 18:25:14 GMT -5
your welcome... thanks for reading!
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Jack
Nov 15, 2007 18:13:01 GMT -5
Post by sapphiresmoke on Nov 15, 2007 18:13:01 GMT -5
Sounds like a great character!
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Jack
Jan 5, 2008 11:12:44 GMT -5
Post by hhorsie on Jan 5, 2008 11:12:44 GMT -5
thankies! i took a while devloping him and stuff...
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Jack
Jan 5, 2008 18:55:39 GMT -5
Post by sapphiresmoke on Jan 5, 2008 18:55:39 GMT -5
You did really well... It sounds like you went into great detail. I want to read the story. I will, eventually... I just need to have time, first.
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