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Post by sapphiresmoke on Mar 12, 2009 10:28:47 GMT -5
Lol.
Any comments for the rest of us, Beauty?
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Mar 13, 2009 17:06:01 GMT -5
Anybody?
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Mar 13, 2009 20:02:23 GMT -5
sorry I've been out of town. I'll think of some soon!
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Mar 14, 2009 20:06:58 GMT -5
Okay. Just don't forget... The challenge thing is not going to work if people won't comment on what's written.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Mar 14, 2009 21:32:51 GMT -5
axel's was really though provoking, other than me not getting the rhythm right. If you rewrote it though, it would work out well. Sapphire you are just plain brilliant
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Post by Endovia on Mar 14, 2009 22:11:29 GMT -5
Axle: I love how you put so much thought into your words. Amazing. Sapphire: The last line is my favorite. Awesome imagery. Beauty: I love the three stories. Really cool. All three are incredible because all of them are different. Isn't it amazing how everyone has a different perspective on the same thing?
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Mar 15, 2009 12:47:33 GMT -5
Yay. ;D Comments.
I love how they're all so different. That was part of why I wanted to try out the challenge thing. It's amazing to see how people approach the same challenge so differently.
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Post by ~Beauty~ on Mar 15, 2009 13:14:47 GMT -5
haha yeah.
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Post by Endovia on Mar 15, 2009 21:37:11 GMT -5
It is. I find it fascinating.
So, what's the next challenge going to be?
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Mar 16, 2009 10:37:27 GMT -5
I think Axle put one up, but I asked her to move it to a new topic. It's under the original challenges topic. Since she hasn't been on, I might just move it myself. You can start thinking on it, though.
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Post by Endovia on Mar 16, 2009 13:59:37 GMT -5
Ok, awesome.
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Post by Axle on Mar 17, 2009 18:52:27 GMT -5
Okay, I tried to amend the post to fit how I wanted it to sound. I'm new to poetry, aside for song writing.
I loved the two other poems. Both of them are just fantastic.
Sapphire, I thought yours was just wonderful.
Beauty, yours really made me sit and think.
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Mar 18, 2009 21:24:45 GMT -5
That's better, Axle. It's easier to feel the rhythm now. When writing poetry, I often think of it as a song... Maybe you should try to feel it that way, too. They're really not so different.
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