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Post by beautifulxdisaster on Jan 28, 2008 23:31:01 GMT -5
Amira – 16 – Femme
Her body had grown to the height of 5’6” mostly from her well, built, muscular legs. A distinct smirk is what usually lies upon her pale face. Her eyes were a paling green, soft to some though whenever wanted they could become cold and could send the shooting thought of agony and fear through your body to your very soul. Her true vicious nature was not what was first perceived from a first glance. Her skinny curves and long silky black, lower back length, hair did not show her true want and desire for blood. She hadn’t walked this world as a vamp without her beloved animal, a wolf. Her wolf by the name of Arisa was of 4 years in age and was found by Amira since she was only 1 year old and has grown very close and protective of her friend and “master”. Though ironically Arisa was the complete opposite in personality of Amira. How about a boy, you may ask, does this beautiful vamp have a special man in her life, well no she doesn’t. She is looking for many years now for the man who would not be frightened by her, a man as fearsome and protective as she.
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Jan 29, 2008 18:15:54 GMT -5
Sounds very cool. Creepy, but that's what a vampire should be, after all. Do you have a story planned for the character?
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Post by beautifulxdisaster on Jan 30, 2008 23:04:09 GMT -5
Yeah acctually but I'm not sure what the title is gonna be yet. I have the plot but not the title how wierd? haha. But yeah I intended her to be very scary when wanted.
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Jan 31, 2008 20:51:02 GMT -5
Sounds great... I usually don't come up with titles until I've written the entire story... Kin of Dragons was just "the Sileny story" until I finished it.
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Post by beautifulxdisaster on Jan 31, 2008 23:33:23 GMT -5
haha. Yea I have like ideas but I can't ever decide on just one haha im kinda pathetic. >.<
XD
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Feb 3, 2008 19:13:28 GMT -5
Ha. Don't worry about that... I have WAY too many ideas to write down. I won't be able to write them all if I live until the end of time.
What are some of your ideas? Maybe I could help you choose one... Or maybe even combine them. I do that with my ideas all the time.
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Post by beautifulxdisaster on Feb 4, 2008 1:16:53 GMT -5
Well the book is about a shape-shifter and a vampiress. and neither know that the other is anything other than human but near the end they end up slipping and telling then needing one another's gifts to save a connection between three worlds...really complex but my ideas are like 'Secret Lives' or 'Distant Loves' or 'Darkness Loves' possibly 'Dream it Alive' but i dont know..plus I like some of the titles in french like. - Le rêver Vivant -means Dream it Alive [or] -L'obscurité Aime - means Darkness Loves [or]-Amour Lointain- which means Distant Loves.
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Feb 4, 2008 20:06:05 GMT -5
Sounds very cool... I'd read it.
Unless you're going to work French into the story, though, I'd keep the title in English.
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Post by beautifulxdisaster on Feb 4, 2008 23:06:33 GMT -5
she speaks french and they meet n france. thats why i was thinking french title. haha. but ya like 'em?
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Feb 5, 2008 22:11:52 GMT -5
Oh, okay. That's cool, then. Yes, I do like them. Lots.  |
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Post by beautifulxdisaster on Feb 5, 2008 23:39:40 GMT -5
haha yea. Im kinda excited to acctually start the book hahah.
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Feb 6, 2008 21:38:10 GMT -5
I'm glad you're excited... And I'd like to read it, or at least part of it, when it's written. It sounds really good.
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Post by hhorsie on Feb 8, 2008 17:12:13 GMT -5
yeah, i never think of a book titile to the end... i generally choose a phrase or something from the book... interseting character, in most vampire stories i've read vampires and wolves are enimies not friends... the plot sounds awesome! start writing, i want to read it! |
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Post by sapphiresmoke on Feb 8, 2008 17:24:56 GMT -5
I usually choose a title from something in the book, too... Although I've strayed from that in a short story I'm writing (I can't post it... it's for a contest). It's about an assassin who doesn't like to kill, and I'm calling it Silence. Other than that, though, I generally choose a title from a word or phrase in the story.
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Post by beautifulxdisaster on Feb 10, 2008 1:48:25 GMT -5
hmmm, I never thought to do that...sounds like a god idea...I think I might post the plot of the story in the novels thing. Cause im pretty sure this is gonna be like a novel simply because it'll be hard to write the book any smaller from the way the plot is.
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